[bloomer]

am thinking pheobe may need a carpeted ramp or something...

[Lesley Silvester]

That's great Thanks Sabrina.  It was one thing I had worried over as to whether it was a strong enough start.  A journalist / writer I met casually a few months ago had a look and said the first few chapters would be good enough for infil but to start with something else

I would agree IF you were writing a book but you are writing an account of your journey as it happens. Later on, if you decide to put it all in book form, then you would probably need to start with a strong anecdote but you can't do that until something has happened.